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Reply Probability Analyzer

See why clients may ignore your proposal — and how to improve it.

Input

Paste full proposal text and an optional client reply for scoring and suggested rewrites.

Analysis

Scored feedback and actionable rewrites to improve reply rates.

Proposal Strength

82

Hook Effectiveness

76

Clarity

80

Confidence

78

Relevance

84

Suggested Improvements

  • Lead with one concrete project outcome in the first 2 lines.
  • Replace vague promises with specific delivery checkpoints.
  • State pricing confidence with scope assumptions in one sentence.
  • Add one trust signal: similar project, metric, or client result.

Rewrite this section - Hook

Current

I can help with your project and deliver quality work.

Suggested

I can deliver your first milestone in 3 days, with clear updates and a review-ready result.

Rewrite this section - Pricing

Current

My price is flexible depending on scope.

Suggested

Based on your current scope, I recommend $800-$1,050 with two milestones and one revision round.